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"Revise and Polish" PPT download

Part One: Lesson Objectives

1. Cultivate students' observation skills and language expression skills, thereby improving students' writing skills.

2. Be able to revise your own compositions, actively exchange opinions with others, and share the joy of revising and polishing your compositions with others.

3. Flexibly use various modification and polishing methods to skillfully modify the composition.

Modify and polish PPT, part 2: Formation stage

① Entering the 21st century, people are no longer unfamiliar with computers, and the computer usage rate is on the rise. When our generation enters society, if we don’t know how to use a computer, we are likely to be considered illiterate. However, what exactly have computers brought to us?

② "My father is a teacher and has very strict requirements on me." "He is old-hearted and said that he must serve the people for a few more years."

③ "There are three roads to reach the destination, namely the left road, the middle road and the right road. The left road and the right road are far away, and the middle road is the closest, so among the three left, middle and right roads, we decided to take the middle road."

The text is too verbose and can be summarized as "We choose to take the middle road to our destination."

④ I am a very naughty child. It can be said that I have been this naughty since I was a child.

⑤ The pond is surrounded by some flowers, plants and trees. The trees are all kinds and lush. The flowers are also various and colorful.

The description is a bit vague. What kind of trees there are, what characteristics they have; what kind of flowers there are, what are the shapes and colors of these flowers, cannot be written down.

summary:

The revision and polishing of the composition should take into account both "words" and "meaning". "Yan" refers to words and expressions. "Yi" refers to the intention and ideological content. The modification of "words" includes two levels. The basic requirement is to change "right". Wrong words and punctuation, incorrect sentences, etc. must be corrected one by one without leaving any flaws. On this basis, we need to further refine the wording to make it accurate and appropriate; refine the sentences to make them smooth and coherent.

Correcting "right" also includes further adjustment and processing of article paragraphs. Whether the paragraph arrangement is reasonable, whether the paragraphs are connected, whether the detailed arrangement is appropriate, etc., are all things that should be focused on when revising. The further requirement is to change it to "good". It is necessary to combine the modification of "words" with the modification of "meaning", supplement the content, process and polish it, so that the content of the article is more substantial and the language is more literary.

Modify and polish the PPT, the third part: sample reference

His bent back is a kind of scenery

It's a rare break from the busy study schedule. Today, our family took advantage of the weekend to visit our grandparents.

My grandparents were very happy to see us and asked us questions, but I always felt something was wrong. When I came here before, my grandpa was always busy, washing fruits, looking for drinks, and looking for snacks specially left for me. Sometimes he couldn't find them. The two of them would complain to each other and even quarrel. Whenever this happened, I would pretend to be... Don't worry, grandparents will smile heartily. But today, not only did grandpa not get me anything to eat, he also sat there reluctantly, as if he was anxious to do something and was restless. Dad also realized this and asked grandpa with concern what happened today. Grandpa didn't say anything at first. After dad's repeated questioning, grandpa told us the truth: it turned out that grandma was sick, and they planned to go to the hospital today.

Grandma was sick, and we were all anxious. We planned to accompany grandma to see a doctor immediately, but grandpa stopped us. He explained anxiously and loudly to his father: "You can get there just by bus No. 75. It's very convenient. If you drive there, you might have no place to park." We all understand what grandpa is thinking. He is afraid of troublesome us, and even more afraid of us worrying. I could see my father's worry. After being rejected by grandpa, he was very anxious. For a moment, his face turned red and he looked like he was about to explode, but he finally held it back. In the end, my father compromised and agreed not to go this time. He would accompany him when the results came out.

General comments: When revising and polishing, the author deleted materials irrelevant to the center, selected typical events in life, and added detailed descriptions of language, movements, expressions, psychology, etc., and used verses to point out the topic at the end, with ellipses giving people more room for imagination. Various modifications and embellishments make the scene of "Dad Bends Back" even more beautiful.

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"Revise and Polish" PPT courseware:

"Revision and Polishing" PPT courseware Part One: Writing Objectives 1. Learn to read the original text in sequence and find out the problems in the original text. 2. Master common methods of revising compositions. Ability to modify compositions from different angles to make them more relevant and brilliant. Title display ..

"Revise and Polish" PPT:

The first part of "Modification and Polishing" PPT: Scenario introduction Good articles are made by modification. Gogol, a 19th-century Russian writer, stipulated that his manuscripts should be revised at least eight times; Tolstoy wrote an article "For the Kreisel Movement", which was only five pages long.

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Update Time: 2024-12-03

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